Saturday, September 01, 2007

4

the man had been hanging
friends thought he was doing an art piece
and other poems

1 comment:

Janet Salsman said...

Yes, I did a hokku instead. On purpose, swiping HAT's accident as an actual technique. This whole thing is somewhat about plagiarism, yes? So plagiarising her brilliant oops seemed not only smart but fair. And it's also five in the morning, which seems a reasonable justification for just about anything.

My first two lines are from this article about a man who killed himself at Burning Man:

http://www.sfgate.com/cgi-bin/article.cgi?f=/c/a/2007/09/01/MNQ1RP7VN.DTL

The last COULD have come from many places, but in fact came from T.S. Eliot's The Waste Land and Other Poems, although in the Burning Man context, perhaps his poem "The Hollow Men" is more appropriate.