Thursday, September 18, 2008

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Draw up equations that fraction
the possibility of moving along
curved dimensions among

4 comments:

snezana said...

I got used to adding comments while we were doing the idolatrous renga. These lines are inpored by the Drake Equation. See http://www.pbs.org/wgbh/nova/origins/drake.html . Now excuse me while I go play with my pocket calculator.

snezana said...

"inpored"? I meant "inspired".

Luba said...

Are you footnoting (or adding endnotes)the way that academic scholars do?
Wow. I have not seen poetry written this way before.
Thanks for the Drake reference. I'll add it to my librarians reference portfolio.

hat said...

Luba, take a look at some of the comments in the Idolatrous Art kasen. B/c we were using found poetry, we tried to footnote some of our references, allusions, etc. I suppose this is the modern day blog version of the old traditional Japanese forms...